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Post by slother on Oct 21, 2012 14:15:57 GMT
Thanks for the times
That you've given me
The memories are all in my mind
And now that we've come
To the end of our rainbow
There's something
I must say out loud
We're once twice
Six times a city
And I love you
Yes We're once twice
Six times a city
And I love you
I love you
You shared my dreams
My joys my pains
You made my life worth living for
And if I had to live my
Life over again
I spend each and every moment with you
We're once twice
Six times a city
And I love you
Yes We're once twice
Six times a city
And I love you
I love you
When we are together
The moments I cherish
With every beat of my heart
To touch you to hold you
To feel you to need you
There's nothing to keep us apart
We're once twice
Six times a city
And I love you
Yes We're once twice
Six times a city
And I love you
I love you
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Post by slother on Oct 21, 2012 14:24:06 GMT
Hmmm maybe a level of mawkish smaltz that would make a Scouser blush.
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Post by stokiejoeofalsager on Oct 21, 2012 14:27:16 GMT
is this to sing at the match?? if so god help block 19 ;D
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Post by Maccca100 on Oct 21, 2012 14:31:23 GMT
Define clever and also define wrote..
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Post by BraveSirRobin on Oct 21, 2012 14:40:16 GMT
He is Lionel Ritchie
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Post by ohbottom on Oct 21, 2012 14:44:43 GMT
I think you mean "Clever song I have just written"  |
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Post by Stokie Mcpot on Oct 21, 2012 15:41:20 GMT
Perhaps sing the chorus, I think the rest could be discarded. Lol.
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Post by Huddysleftfoot on Oct 21, 2012 15:52:18 GMT
That Lionel Richtea...doesn't half take the biscuit ;D
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Post by Pretty Little Boother on Oct 21, 2012 16:23:28 GMT
I think you mean "Clever song I have just written" "I just wrote" is fine, as is your phrasing. "I've just wrote" or "I just written" is non-standard English. |
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Post by Pretty Little Boother on Oct 21, 2012 16:25:12 GMT
In fact your way is wrong, because it should be "Clever song which I have just written" if we're following that route.
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Post by Maccca100 on Oct 21, 2012 16:50:53 GMT
In fact your way is wrong, because it should be "Clever song which I have just written" if we're following that route. Or clever song thats not actually that clever of which I have just changed the words to a well established song, so infact not wrote the song, more just wrote out a different version. Long title mind |
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Post by ohbottom on Oct 21, 2012 19:38:20 GMT
I think you mean "Clever song I have just written" "I just wrote" is fine, as is your phrasing. "I've just wrote" or "I just written" is non-standard English. Holy fuckin crap, smiley winky thing, smiley winky thing, smiley winky thing! It's right there! |
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